Day 1, p40 redo

Redo of this page.
This is much better now. And it also means I've finished the print edits for the actual comic - now all I need to do is make the cover (including insides) and organise the extras in the back and then we'll be ready to go to print.

So exciting!

Characters, art and story belong to me!
_{Now on to contest prizes! |D}